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Agnijaat Bhadra 1428, August 2021 critique by Labanya

Agnijaat Bhadra 1428 August 2021
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Critique by Labanya

Agnijaat Bhadra 1428 August 2021 critique by Labanya

Agnijaat Shraban begins with a beautiful sketch of Lord Ganesha.

Agnijaat has gone a complete makeover from July 2021. It is now distributed in three primary sections, stories, poetry and essays. There are the usual delightful illustrations too.


New Parliament House: Things Indian politicians do and get re-elected after that!
Making rich richer: The policy of politicians all over the world.
Making poor poorer: This is a specialty of third world countries, India at present may be one of the top ranking ones in this game.
Deadly: is a piece of chilling, terrifying reality.
Suicidal business strategy: Very true. First learn business ethics like international companies then see whether or not people buy your “Desi” things.
SOS: Embrace: You can’t run from life, accept all its colours, embrace only positive ones. Good suggestion.
FTQFS: back to caves: The cavemen are trying their level best, the question is will women scurry back to caves and rot?

POETRY section:

Beautiful pic of a fairy as section image.

After that there were ten poems and ten fantastic drawings of poppies and they all were gorgeous, there is something about red flowers! Loved the ninth poem the most, sort of nostalgic and haunting.

Then there was an announcement of Agni’s new graphic story channel in YouTube, check it out if you can, it is good.

Agni Kahini by Sharmishtha Basu

Next there were four gorgeous photos of one of the prettiest birds that can be found in cities, woodpecker.


A set of stories from Black Mist and other stories:

Ten fantastic stories about things that go bumping in the night but of different types, loved them all. They all had different things to talk about. Being a ghost story fan I have no reason to complain.

After that there were critiques of previous month’s Ezines and Patreon books, some by me of course, some by SB.

The cartoon Mr Stick: Another dose of reality!

In the end quite enjoyed the Ezine, and its colourful sketches/paintings especially they are refreshing and pretty!

That is it I guess! See you again next month, and thank you Agni/Sharmishtha for translating my works!

Yours sincerely,

By the way if you see any other Labanya in Sharmishtha’s social circle that will not be me. I don’t use my pen name [Labanya] in social media, use the real one.


A bookworm transformed into an addicted writer. I love to write and illustrate them myself. By love I mean love, no half-hearted relationship, a full-fledged, passionate love, I can’t pass two days in a stretch without writing/painting (cyber), just feel empty like lovers do when their lovers are away on a tour! Even though I am thoroughly enjoying self-publishing with amazon, but if you like my work and want to publish my works in your magazine, books or better if you want to publish a book of my works please make me very happy by contacting me. Or if you want to sell my works on commission basis only!! contact me, I will be quite relieved. Honestly writing and selling your own work is a very BORING combination. So you are more than welcome! Mail me, or go to- my blog (I have 16 blogs in wordpress, all active, some on daily basis, every one on weekly basis screaming and vowing my LOVE for writing and painting- this one is first-born, so special) (You will get the link to my remaining blogs there) or you can check out my ezines- monthly- And if you want fb you can go to my page, linkedin- my email id and I am in goodreads and completelynovel too I guess I said enough about myself, right? You will forget if I stuff too much here, so if you are curious to know this humble creature just join me in my blogs :)


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