the thief, a haiku

HH4 4.5.14 The thief

I try to write haiku in pure form, following the rule of 5/7/5 syllables but am pretty sure that they are quite impure 🙂

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8 thoughts on “the thief, a haiku

  1. more than the 5-7-5 structure I like the 2-1 structure of thoughts in Haiku. The first 2 lines presenting one thought while the 3rd a seemingly different but connected thought !

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