pensive a Tanka

golden sphere of
streetlight on street below.
absolute silence
of night streets, so pensive
touches with healing power!

Syllable counts : 5-7-5-7-7

Think of one or two simple images from a moment you have experienced and describe them in concrete terms — what you have seen, tasted, touched, smelled, or heard. Write the description in two or three lines. Describe these feelings or thoughts in the remaining two or three lines

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2 thoughts on “pensive a Tanka

I LOVE TO READ AND RETURN COMMENTS. SOME OF MY READERS DONT LEAVE URL, IF THEY START LEAVING URL I WILL JUST LOVE TO READ THEIR WORKS TOO.

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