No life is perfect – a tanka

cool morning turns in
a handful of burning ash!
Every time that
Ghoul shows up in street I
Think no life is perfect!

Every time I come across that ghoul (mentioned in heading for insult, tanka of 14.4.13) I just remind myself that there is no life in this world that is perfect! You should be happy that he can’t enter your household!

Syllable counts : 5-7-5-7-7
Think of one or two simple images from a moment you have experienced and describe them in concrete terms — what you have seen, tasted, touched, smelled, or heard. Write the description in two or three lines. Describe these feelings or thoughts in the remaining two or three lines

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2 thoughts on “No life is perfect – a tanka

I LOVE TO READ AND RETURN COMMENTS. SOME OF MY READERS DONT LEAVE URL, IF THEY START LEAVING URL I WILL JUST LOVE TO READ THEIR WORKS TOO.

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