sad lonely nights a Tanka

ABBA cries for
a man after midnight.
well mostly love is
partially explained in
that lovely song after all!

Syllable counts : 5-7-5-7-7
Think of one or two simple images from a moment you have experienced and describe them in concrete terms — what you have seen, tasted, touched, smelled, or heard. Write the description in two or three lines. Describe these feelings or thoughts in the remaining two or three lines

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5 thoughts on “sad lonely nights a Tanka

  1. You know I wish wish wish that I could express myself in a few words rather than endless reams of them… but don’t seem able to do so. I love this poem, it felt like it recognized something vital. Plus I’m a huge Abba fan and I love that song… Thank you for this.

I LOVE TO READ AND RETURN COMMENTS. SOME OF MY READERS DONT LEAVE URL, IF THEY START LEAVING URL I WILL JUST LOVE TO READ THEIR WORKS TOO.

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